Monday, August 24, 2009

55 fiction.!

I saw this contest in writing.com website. According to wikipedia

A literary work will be considered 55 Fiction if it has:

1. Fifty-five words or less (A non-negotiable rule)

2. A setting,

3. One or more characters,

4. Some conflict, and

5. A resolution. (Not limited to moral of the story)

6. The title of the story is not part of the overall word count, but it still can’t exceed seven words.


Love story.


He Loved me more than his own mother.

He vowed to even die for me.

He had a wife and two children. Yet, he loved me more.

He climbed mountains to show me his love.

His salvation lied in my love.

He fell into my arms.

His eyes cloudy..

"Jai-hind" ..were his last words.


Well, I don know how pathetic it sounds!! I dont even know if you can discern the hidden nuances. Anyway, I'll gather that from your comments! :)

11 comments:

Janani said...

Not bad at all...

Praveen Kumar Munna said...

Machan eppadi edhallam, eppadi irundha nee eppadi aitiya. Manasu kastama poidchu da. :D

Manish said...

:O ??

Unknown said...

sathyama purila.. neya explain panidu

Praveen Kumar Munna said...

@Manish
kevalama ellarayum kalaichikuta irundha, now suddenly ennamo lam eludhura. Thats y i meant. That was a compliment for ur work if u dont understand even now.

Manish said...

:P Thanks.! And, @ Anju, am explaining it in the post itself. See if you can get it! :)

Unknown said...

yaa manish... danku..

Anonymous said...

not bad!!!!

Elvia said...

No one would call such a patriotic post pathetic :)

Manish said...

Most o ma friends either over-looked it or totally mis-understood it - The primary reasons why i thought many wouldn like it! :(
Anyways, when a 'novel writer' says its good, It has to be. Period. :P

workhard said...

Very well written....

seriously...

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